Will Ferguson

Gabrielle Galloway

Jeff Wright

Melissa Cochran

Dana Brand

Credibility as bloggers
All students attend UNC, giving them at least an initial credibility as blog authors. Because we have yet to finish an assignment, our credibility with our audience will come as our blog and the semester progress. Most of the authors are freshmen so strict writing styles have not yet been formulated. One of the group members is a journalism major so a blog will allow her to use her talents. Everyone else is upbeat about creating a blog because it lacks the dullness of continually writing papers in one particular style. Here we are allowed to be as creative as we want to be and fashion the blog to our liking.
In terms of potential styles, having a sophomore and a senior in the group makes it more versatile because these two members have had experience writing in certain techniques, especially the senior. Our rhetorical style will basically remain the same but there will probably be an obvious difference among the writers, although all styles will be directed at the high school level.
Purpose and Direction of Our Blog
Our blog is directed at upperclassmen high school students who are considering UNC or any other major university. Therefore, our blog will need to accomplish a number of goals and be presented in a way that is both appealing to these students as well as maintain an organized characteristic that will give legitimacy to the blog. The blog will maintain a relaxed theme in that the vocabulary used will reflect that of a high school senior rather than a level that would be appropriate for an upper level, university research paper. At times the blog may seem to be more advanced that what an average high-schooler may be ready for, but we feel that this blog is directed at above average, competitive students. In any case, this will not be an excuse to dumb down the blog, but will just be another writing style, which in itself, will reflect the goals of English 102.
There are a number of goals that we want to achieve with this blog. One is to simply introduce high school upperclassmen to freshman English. Entering college is a difficult experience for some, so helping seniors make the transition in any way possible is a service to them. Also, the blog can be a place where our audience can express their feelings towards the material we post. This will help them formulate opinions on an array of material, something they will have to do throughout college. The goals of our blog will surely expand as we progress through the semester, as is the natural tendency of a blog.
As a blog is a more personal means of presenting information, our blog will obviously carry some occasional biases, however our objective is not to infuse the blog with too much bias, but with neutrality given the wide range of feelings about certain issues that come from a broad audience such as high school students.
To conclude with the introductory post, we will try link our blog entries to the overall subject/theme that writing is a dynamic art and that each individual may approach subject matter with different perspectives and ideas. The assignments for this class are based around the assumption that assumptions do not necessarily hold true in different fields of writing. For example, the first unit deals with testing the assumption that scientific writing is set in stone. Through the different perspectives of our blog’s authors, we will challenge this assumption and will do the same for the following units. While we are working as a unit, individual styles will certainly fill our blog because it is, in fact, a work compiled from individual efforts. We want to show our audience, who may be nervous about the assumption that college students must write a particular way, that different approaches may be used in writing about the same material. As we all know, and as we want to illustrate to those students striving for a spot at top universities, the best way to approach a writing assignment is with an open mind and a lot of creativity.
8 comments:
Sounds nice, guys! Your introductions are great!
The organization of your blog really contributes to a clear goal and focus. I like the introduction paragraphs and I think you all clearly state what kind of audience and feedback you hope to get. I believe that you will recieve helpful feedback by doing that.
Your group's post is different from some of the others because of the fact that each member does not tell about themselves in first person. While the reader still gets to know the group members this way, it seems a little more impersonal. Overall, I like the way the blog is organized, and the choice to direct your blog towards upperclassmen in high school. Some of the pictures are very entertaining ! :)
Great blog. I think it is a real good idea the fact that you guys are trying to attract creative high school seniors and try to accustom them to college english writing courses. I also like the variety of age within your group, I think that will help a lot.
I like how ya'll took an audience that is over looked from time to time. This blog should be really helpful considering more and more high schoolers use the computer on a daily bases. I like how ya'll acknowledge some of the concerns that high school juniors and seniors may face as they prepare for college. The organization of your blog is great because the people looking at you guys' blog get to know you first before learning about the main objective of the blog. Good job.
I think the idea that your target audience are successful high school seniors will differentiate your blog from some of the others. It will be interesting to see how your blog develops, as there are a variety of tones/styles you could use. And the pictures definitely contribute to the informality...
sounds good, i like the idea of catering to high school seniors, especially since a lot of them really won't be ready for a freshman english class at a major university next year!
Great first post, folks. The only decision I question is putting your introductions before your mission statement. If that was the first post I'd encountered I'd wonder why on earth I'm reading about these people. I also think that the third-person voice is a little awkward, since the bios seem as if they were written by the person being described. I think that could've worked a little bit better if you'd interviewed one another and then described one another rather than describing yourself. Still, a very good start!
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