tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3451919512204223040.post2271921507268200756..comments2023-11-02T02:20:47.219-07:00Comments on never too cool for school: Kyoto Protocol ControversyJessica Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01894195773003088390noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3451919512204223040.post-4465068151271779272007-02-11T11:01:00.000-08:002007-02-11T11:01:00.000-08:00Will, I think you've done a good job on your first...Will, I think you've done a good job on your first post. You've done a very good job of summarizing and critiquing the articles and everything is very clear and powerfully-written. I do have some critiques, though. First of all, I think that you should be careful about your citations. The link in your first paragraph doesn't work, and the way in which you introduce the summary makes it impossible to tell which of the two articles on your works cited list you are summarizing.<BR/><BR/>Also, I think that your post is a perfect example of one that could've benefited from a little more background research. I think the two opinions expressed are rather far from one another and I'm disinclined to trust either one wholeheartedly. I think that bouncing things off of a third article/opinion could have done a lot here, though obviously the assignment doesn't require that.Daniel Luptonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09155051097150699880noreply@blogger.com